Canyonlands National Park, Utah, is the geographical starting point
of Edward Abbey’s Desert Solitaire. More
specifically, within the park his home base, a "little tin government
housetrailer" in which he lived for the six months of
summer three different seasons, watches over the Arches National Monument.
He travels this expanse of land, containing
a large number natural arches, carved out of the desert rock by the
persistent forces of nature over the years, cleaning up
after weekend tourists, scouting for lost or confused hikers, and simply
taking part in the world of nature which surrounds
him. In the introduction of Desert Solitaire his love of this work
is easy to see: "Those were all good times, especially the
first two seasons when the tourist business was poor and the time passed
extremely slowly, as time should pass, with the
days lingering and long, spacious and free as the summers of childhood."
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Edward Abbey uses adjectives freely threw out the essays in this book,
often more than one at a time, yet done in such
away that he is not verbally gaudy.
"Each day begins clean and promising in the sweet cool clear light of dawn."
"Stars which are unusually
bold and close, with an icy glitter in their light--Glints of blue, emerald,
gold….cliffs and pinnacles and
balanced tacks of sandstone (now entrusted to my care) have lost the rosy
glow of sunset and
becomes soft, intangible, in unnamed unnamable shades of violet, colors
that seem to radiate
from--not overly--their surfaces."
At first a reader may find it almost laborious to concentrate on the
sentence at hand in order to keep the motion of the
piece flowing. After reading the first essay or two his style becomes
less taxing and more enwrapping.
Abbey uses commas almost as a cushioning between all the thoughts he
squeezes into one sentence, and even with the
padding the pieces of the sentence some times rub against each other.
Occurring even more often than his detailed
adjectival phrases are the serial listings of thoughts or objects of
nature. When running off on a tangent raging against
paved roads in a park and of the need for requiring tourist to get
out of their cars and on their feet to enjoy the land he
says:
A venturesome minority will always be eager to set off in their own, and
no obstacles should be placed
in their path; let time take risks, for Godsake, let them get lost, sunburnt,
stranded, drowned, eaten by
bears, buried alive under avalanches--that is the tight and privilege of
any free American. But the rest,
the majority, most of them new to the out-of-doors, will need and welcome
assistance, instruction and
guidance. Many will not know how to saddle a horse, read a topographical
map, follow a trail over
slickrock, memorize landmarks, build a fire in rain, treat snakebite, rappel
down a cliff, glissade down
a glacier, read a compass, find water under sand, load a burro, splint
a broken bone, bury a body,
patch a rubber boat, portage a waterfall, survive a blizzard, avoid lightning,
cook a porcupine comfort
a girl during a thunderstorm, predict the weather, dodge falling rack,
climb out of a box canyon, or
pour piss out or a boot. Park rangers know these things, or should know
them, or used to know them
and can relearn them; they will be needed."
This quote is one of the more exaggerated examples of his work. It does
how ever illustrate his taste in this grammatical
sense quite distinctly. The style displayed here gives one a sense
that he is simply spilling over with information that he
wants to tell so he squeezes every word he can into each sentence,
and sometime more. Abbey uses these types of
extended sentences a little less than sparingly, yet not to the point
of being over whelming. These paragraph long sentences
are very similar to the way Brian Doyle's essay Two on Two capture's
the reader in an intense drive forward. The majority
of these sentences are a grammatical nightmare and he knows it. He
makes no apology, in fact he makes it quite clear in
his introduction that his intention is not to meet grammatical standards.
"Serious critics, serious librarians, serious associate
professors of English will if they read this work dislike it intensely;
at least I hope so." On the opposite extreme are
sporadic one, two, and three word long sentences.
Spontaneity is a word that is very descriptive of both the man Edward
Abby, and his writing. In one instance while
stopped by the Grand Canyon on the way to Los Angeles with a few friends
he hears of a place called Havasu, down in
the canyon that he decides he must visit. He runs down the fourteen-mile
trail to "look things over. When [ he] returned
five weeks later [ he] discovered that the others had gone on to Los
Angeles without [ him] ." This for me is the epitome of
spontaneity. His writing possess a feeling of freeness or openness
because of the way his mentality affects his work.
The majority of the essays within Desert Solitaire are elaborations
of his experiences while employed as a ranger in the
Canyonlands National Park, or of his experiences at other times yet
in the same area. Abbey does not build essays in
direct relation to his personal experience in only three instances.
Yet, even in these there is a type of introduction in which
he is sharing or experiencing something and them he shoots off on a
tangent. One such tangent ends up telling a short story
of a man and his family trying to strike it lucky in the Uranium mining
business. (This is in the Sixties when the government
was paying anyone for uranium.) This short story takes on a style much
like a novel about some character. His second
tangent is his numerous reflections on "industrial tourism" (Tourism
solely as a money makeing enterprise). Thus, industrial
tourism causes loss of sensitivity to nature and the best ways to enjoy
that nature. He continues to explain what this type of
tourism will do to the parks and nature and how he dislikes it. His
last major tangent is the plight of the Native American.
He discusses a little of their history and their "current" problems.
Edward Abbey uses the desert "more as a medium than as a material."
The desert plays a clear unifying role threw out the
essays of the book. Each essay unfolds in its own unique way, yet always
in the background (and foreground) so
consistent that almost becomes second nature the hot, dry, dusty, sandy,
rocky Utah desert wraps around everything.
Abbey simply writes out of the world in which he is living. It is not
something exotic or extra special, it is simply his world,
but he examines it in such a way as to draw every bit if goodness from
it. It is in much this way that the Amish essayist
David Kline writes out of the world of his community. Each have the
commonality of writing on things of nature, but they
are very different in their mental, physical, and spiritual worlds.
Kline thrives in community and his essays are full of
relationships and nature of the Ohio mid-west. Abbey seeks solitude,
will interact with people when necessary, and writes
from the Utah desert. Kline's appreciation of nature is evident simply
in the way he writes about it; Abbey openly explains
the greatness of pure nature and just as openly criticizes anyone who
would think differently. Kline's faith is a subtle
constant in his essays; Abbey only briefly mentions God:
" 'Ralph Newcomb,' I say, 'do you believe in God?'
'Who?' he says.
'Who?'
'Who.'
'You said it,' I say."
Abbey writes not to reveal any deep, thought provoking, life philosophies.
He simply writes of things of surface
importance, for it is these things, "…the flavor of an apple…the feel
of music, the bark of a tree, the abrasion of granite
and sand…" that he loves. He writes of the land surrounding him and
cherishes it. He writes to preserve the pure nature
that he once was a part of and is so quickly vanishing. He writes so
that others may also take part in this nature.